My tripe was to Caesarea, we went to the sea we did picnic there.
The sea was very Calm and quiet so we had so much fun, we swam and Dove in the sea.
We spend some hours in the sea and then we moved to second part of the tripe.

the second part of the tripe was to see the city Caesarea and to travel there for a wile.
the city is very big and amazing so ancient and interesting.
I was very exited to see the city I never bean in  Caesarea before it was my firs time and I loved it so much.

Later in the day we went to see the antiques of the city, the city history, her old and ruined structures who were a magnificent
dream of one man who dreamed to build Caesarea and he succeeded but she was ruined after his death by many enemies who attacked the city.
All of this information we got from a movie we saw about the city, all her years in ten minutes.

In conclusion I enjoyed the tripe very much and I hope we will do it again soon.
I recommend for all the family's who love to travel around the country I recommend to travel to Caesarea it is such a beautiful place for traveling and for studying the history of our beautiful places.         


       אין צורך לבדוק סתם רשמתי

I support the the Ministry of Education idea that provide the student the matirial for the bible bagrut exam online.A way for the students to learn more effective to the bible bagrut exam.

The pupils have to study on their own with the help of a forum, specially designed for  pupils to ask a teacher questions and get help on line. This forum also allows pupils to contact and assist each other.


I think the idea is a great idea that makes the students preper better for the the exam, memorise more effective the matirial they need for the bagrut bible exam.I suppurt the idea of the Ministry of Education it's can advance our time can open a new way of studing a better way to preper for the bagrut exams.


I hope that the forum will stay open until I will need to do the bible bagrut exam. I think it is a great way to learn for the bagrut, a better way to learn with a friend without even go to his home it's makes the studing more easier.
I support the forum idea it will make the student lives more easier and more social.


In conclusion I think the forum will be successful it will make a progress in our lives in our studies and in our social life.
It will start a new age an age of  combination of technology with human assist each other.    

  

Pupils have a lot of things to do in the afternoon. Some join a volunteering program and some prefer to hang out with their friends.My friends prefer to hang out,  play football and basketball, go to the cinima and watch movies.

I love to hang up with my friends in all those places but (I) also volunteer in the police because I love to help  people and I love the excitement in this job. It's very challenging and fun at the same time.The volunteering provides me the excitement in my life and provides me a job in my spare time.

In addition, I do the volunteering because I want to make a change where I live, to do someting good for the people in my city, provide protection to them from all the dangerous people who want to hurt them or other(phr.).I feel that the police can protect me and I want to message it to(phr.) all the people in the city.

In conclusion, I think that to(מיותר) volunteer(ing) and to(מיותר) hang(ing) up with my friends make my life very enjoyable, I love to them both. But I think that the volnteering is much more importent(sp. - important), its(gr. - it) helps you and in(ww. - at) the same time helps the others, to make their lives more enjoyable and more protected. It's not about you, it's about the other(s), about the peopel(sp.) you care about the most, your family and your friends. 


Much better. Well done!
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Daphna 

Past or Future

The story "The fun they had" was written by Isaac Asimov.The story is about one child who lives in the future, in the year 2157.He finds a book in his attic.The book tells(ww. - is) about how in the past the childrens studied in school with a human teacher and not at home with a mechnical teacher, like in the future.
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In the begining it sounds to him very fuuny and not so realistic because he is used to
studying at home and with a mechanical teacher.Studying with other peopel(sp.) in class makes it easier and more enjoyable. On the other hand, the mechnical teacher doesn't make mistakes, and you can study with your teacher in your house in privacy.(phr. - in the privacy of your house)




In our way of learning, there is one disadvantage, like(ww. - which is) walking to school. If you live far from your school it's a big problem. But in our way of learning, you meet new peopel(sp.) and you meet new friends in school. In addition, the teacher is human and therefore she has emotions and she cares about her students. The best thing with(ww. - about) studying in school is that you can get out from your home and meet new places(phr.).




The lerning way(sp.+ww.) in the story with a mechnical teacher, I think is less beneficial because you stay in your home almost the whole day and you don't meet other peopels(sp.) and you don't make friends. In addition, studying alone makes you feel sad because you can't speak with  anybody and you lose your comunication skills.




In conclusion, I think that the best way to study is to study like in our time, in schools with  other people, not alone in class and with a human teacher that can comunicate with her students and corrects their mistakes with huge undersanding. Therefore, I suggest that they will study like me learn like in their old days


This is better. Good work.
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downloading music for free from the Internet moral?

The big issue nowadays is  free downloading files like music, games, movies or even computer software programs from the internet without any permission from the creator. This big issue is called piracy, downloading files from the internet without the permission from the writer, director or designer, who expect people (to) buy their work if  their are leaked to internet and everyone can download them (phr.). The piracy let(ww.+gr. - allows) peopels(sp.  - people) the option(מיותר) to download their work for free and then they don’t get money.There are two sides to piracy.




 Like I mentioned, the(מיותר) piracy is like stealing from the people who worked hard, they invent things and make our life(ww. - lives) more enjoyable. The(מיותר) piracy is a violation of the law; piracy is illegal, meaning if you download songs from the Internet you are considered criminals.
You steal the creator's work, to enjoy his work you need to pay for it


On the other hand, the(מיותר) piracy makes the(מיותר) people's lives easier and more comfortable. If you want to hear a song, play a computer game or even watch a movie and you can't buy since  you don’t have the money, you just download it on to your computer.On the other hand, piracy is good for the creator it makes the public connect to the creator's work and then convince them to go to a concert or even buy the original disk or the original game and the original movie and then the sales are much higher.
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In conclusion, piracy is so complex.In the(ww. - our) world there are many opinions about the piracy(phr.),  if it halpeful or not halpful (phr.+sp.)  but in the end more than 50% from the population are using the piracy for their personal benefit. I suggest that the law against piracy will be enforced more severely than it is, the copyrights need to be more careful  in the issue of the piracy .

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Daphna 

 

Cellphones in school

Cell phones are widely used these days. Nearly everyone owns one and that includes teenagers and even young children. The cell phone is a very important communication device, which is used in the entire  world. It  creates a big problem because of  the need to speak with someone, play, listen to music during the class. Therefore, a week ago, the principal of our school decided that students would not be allowed to bring cell phones to school. He says that cell phones disturb our education in school since it distracts us in our studies when we send messages and play in class.

 

I support his rule because, first, the cell phones in school are a big problem. The students bring them to class, they forget to turn the cell phones off or even don’t want to and suddenly the cell phone rings in  class during a lesson or a test or even when they have special activities out side of school. The cell phones are not helpful in the school area, they just disturb the progress of the class and disturb the other students' concentration as well. the cell phone in school is being used for text messaging, playing or even listening to music during the class.

 

Second, the cell phones can be used to disturb the lesson by calling  another student with the purpose to disturb him or make him get into trouble. In addition, another use for the cell phone is cheating during the tests or text messaging to other students the answers of the test. The cell phone is much easier to hide during the test, so it is much easier to cheat on the test.

 

In conclusion, I agree with the rule that says that cell phones are not allowed in school. It will make our studies more effective and active without any rings or noise from any cell phones during the lesson, so that we can stay more focused in our studies,learn more and to make a progress in  life.


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Daphna 

Special Activities

Special activities are very important. In our school we go to many special activities, like lectures, plays, field trips and movies. The purpose of those special activities is to enrich our knowledge and to open our minds to new information and subjects in our lives.
One more purpose is to make our time in school more enjoyable.


Those special activities are supposed to open a new world of information to the students who  participate in them. But there is a problem.The special activities can be very interesting and educational but the problem is the interest level of the students in the the lecture or the movie or even a filed trip.They can choose not to listen to the information and even do some problems if they are very bored.

At the other hand, the special activities can be a good excuse for the students to get out of school with no homework for the next lesson. In addition, the special activities can be more fun and unforgettable, like school trips across the country in special sites with very important information and findings.


In conclusion, I can say that each one has a different opinion on the special activities. But, in the end, the result is that we learn new things about us  and about our interests in the special activities.We can discover and explore new environments and subjects in our lives. I think that the special activities can only help us not harm us. 

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Daphna