The story "The fun they had" was written by Isaac Asimov.The story is about one child who lives in the future, in the year 2157.He finds a book in his attic.The book tells(ww. - is) about how in the past the childrens studied in school with a human teacher and not at home with a mechnical teacher, like in the future.
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In the begining it sounds to him very fuuny and not so realistic because he is used to
studying at home and with a mechanical teacher.Studying with other peopel(sp.) in class makes it easier and more enjoyable. On the other hand, the mechnical teacher doesn't make mistakes, and you can study with your teacher in your house in privacy.(phr. - in the privacy of your house)
In our way of learning, there is one disadvantage, like(ww. - which is) walking to school. If you live far from your school it's a big problem. But in our way of learning, you meet new peopel(sp.) and you meet new friends in school. In addition, the teacher is human and therefore she has emotions and she cares about her students. The best thing with(ww. - about) studying in school is that you can get out from your home and meet new places(phr.).
The lerning way(sp.+ww.) in the story with a mechnical teacher, I think is less beneficial because you stay in your home almost the whole day and you don't meet other peopels(sp.) and you don't make friends. In addition, studying alone makes you feel sad because you can't speak with anybody and you lose your comunication skills.
In conclusion, I think that the best way to study is to study like in our time, in schools with other people, not alone in class and with a human teacher that can comunicate with her students and corrects their mistakes with huge undersanding. Therefore, I suggest that they will study like me learn like in their old days
This is better. Good work.
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In the begining it sounds to him very fuuny and not so realistic because he is used to
studying at home and with a mechanical teacher.Studying with other peopel(sp.) in class makes it easier and more enjoyable. On the other hand, the mechnical teacher doesn't make mistakes, and you can study with your teacher in your house in privacy.(phr. - in the privacy of your house)
In our way of learning, there is one disadvantage, like(ww. - which is) walking to school. If you live far from your school it's a big problem. But in our way of learning, you meet new peopel(sp.) and you meet new friends in school. In addition, the teacher is human and therefore she has emotions and she cares about her students. The best thing with(ww. - about) studying in school is that you can get out from your home and meet new places(phr.).
The lerning way(sp.+ww.) in the story with a mechnical teacher, I think is less beneficial because you stay in your home almost the whole day and you don't meet other peopels(sp.) and you don't make friends. In addition, studying alone makes you feel sad because you can't speak with anybody and you lose your comunication skills.
In conclusion, I think that the best way to study is to study like in our time, in schools with other people, not alone in class and with a human teacher that can comunicate with her students and corrects their mistakes with huge undersanding. Therefore, I suggest that they will study like me learn like in their old days
This is better. Good work.
(84)
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